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Fostering life-long readers

This semester brought with it a change in the independent reading blog posts that are required in CyberEnglish9. Last semester, the IR blog posts requirements focused heavily on literary analysis skills. Obviously this is an important writing skill for students to practice in the English classroom; however, I noticed that over the semester the students became increasingly disengaged in the act of reading. Our designated reading day became louder and louder. I became more and more frustrated with the overabundance of socializing. Then one day I was riding home from school with a co-worker or in this case, my co-pilot. We had an amazing conversation about the cruelty J.K. Rowling inflicts upon her characters in the Harry Potter series. We were having fun talking about literature. It dawned on me that independent reading was no longer fun, for the students or for me. I felt like a hypocrite. In my effort to produce stronger writers, I had sucked the joy out of simply escaping into a book by suffocating them with formulaic writing: claim, support, explanation. What was the point of reading for fun if in the end you were subjected to repetitive, disengaging writing assignments? Thus, I made it my mission to put the excitement back into reading this semester, which is the main objective of independent reading: foster life-long readers. I set out to complete my mission with three different approaches.

Approach #1: There was a shift from literary analysis focused blog posts to genre blog posts. Students are able to select creative, abstract writing outlets to express their ideas. Through these posts students are still required to reflect upon the literary elements that make-up the story in their novel. Now, they are able to do so through pieces such as a MP3 playlist of songs that reflect the tone, conflict, desires of the characters in the book. They can construct a piece of poetry that demonstrates the internal-conflicts a character encounters.

Has this been a perfect solution? No, not exactly. Some of the students still struggle with extending their writing beyond summarizing the plot of the text; however, through trial and error they are making strides in their writing. The important part is the process of trial and error, because this shows their engagement. Silent reading days have once again become quiet except for the occasional paper shift. They are once again diving-head first into their novels. The noises of blogging days are once again the sweet sound of clicks from keyboard keys. Even though every student may not nail every blog post, they are excited by the opportunity to express their creativity.

To aid in the writing process, I have been conducting a series of minilessons that reflect the genre posts. For example, the class read and analyzed Walt Whitman’s I Hear America Singing and Langston Hughes’ Let America Be America Again. After we analyzed the poems, the students formed groups to develop one of the optional genre posts. The results were inspiring. One group created a cartoon figure of a character they felt represented Langston Hughes’ poem. This figure was hunched over because of the weight of the working tools strapped to his back. He also had shackles around his legs that were made out of the words that represented the emotions of discrimination and racism. Finally, they pointed out the fact that he didn’t have a face, which expressed their idea that too often people are clumped by meaningless labels and not seen as individuals. A definite step in the right direction.

Approach #2: I borrowed a tool from my co-worker’s Teacher Tool Box and developed a series of interview questions. On select reading days I conduct interviews with students about their independent reading novel. I ask them to describe different literary elements from their books, describe future blog posts they intend on creating, and about what they plan on reading next. If they don’t have any ideas about what to read, I offer my advice. In the beginning, students were extremely hesitant when I called their name for an interview. I think they were nervous about having a conversation with their teacher. I focused on keeping my voice light and airy, nothing too authoritative. I gave them time to consider their responses before answering. I asked follow up questions to engage them further. They are currently preparing for their third interview and they are much more relaxed. In fact, many are excited to talk about their novels. One student today actually asked if he could have an interview. He just finished The Giver by Lowis Lowry and wanted to talk about it. Again, this experience hasn’t been perfect. Not all students are as prepared as they should be to participate in literature discussions. Some students I have to theoretically pull information out of. Finally, I love talking to my students about literature, but the current set-up is not allowing them to talk to each other about literature. This will be my next step in expanding independent reading in my classroom. Those results are for a future blog post though.

Approach #3: For the love of young adult literature! I haven’t read a YAL book this semester! Approach #3, get back into the YAL game. The first book I selected to begin my journey back into the world of YAL is Fever 1793 by Laurie Halse Anderson, which also satisfies the requirements of the YAL Historical Fiction Challenge that I signed up for. I am only about two chapters into the book and I have to admit it is pretty slow moving so far, but it has a lot to live up to, Speak and Twisted. I have had several students comment on how much they loved it though so I vow to finish it. Review to come.

November blues

I have found myself feeling a little low as a teacher lately. A combination of icky weather, too many ungraded blogs posts, and a mental block on how to teach visual analysis in an upcoming unit, has left me in a rut. Until today. My daughter’s persistent head cold caused me to miss school yesterday in order to take her to the doctor; however, I didn’t want my students to have the typical “work day” with a sub there. For the past two weeks, my students and I have been reading and discussing Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. I wanted them to continue their animated discussions without me there.

I devised a lesson plan in which the students, as a class, had to create a literary analysis paragraph that considered the following questions:

  • How do the actions of Tom differ from those suggested by Huck?
  • How are Tom’s actions determined by society’s influence?
  • What comment is Twain making about society through Tom?

6th Hour’s response:

Society is very impulsive with their actions, taking little thought for the consequences, as scene in the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. Mark Twain compares the impetuous actions of Tom with Huck’s practical ideas. Tom suggests that they cut off Jim’s leg, while Huck states that “there ain’t no necessity for it” (240). Huck’s beliefs prove to be more logical, while Tom’s are romanticized. Tom’s irrational thinking would get the trio into more trouble than needed. The reason for Tom’s imaginative thoughts stems from the teachings of society through fictional books he reads. “I’ve seen it in books; and so of course that’s what we’ve got to do” (9). This leads into Tom’s irrational ideas later including his question to Huck: “Did you ever hear of prisoner having picks and shovels and all the modern conveniences in his wardrobe to dig himself out with?” (243). Tom then proceeds to aks Huck if he has any reasonableness in him, when it is clear that Huck is more reational, therefore indicating dramatic irony. Twain is emphasizing society’s need to be more pragmatic like Huck, instead of impractical, as show through Tom.

As usual my students surpassed my expectations. Both classes considered the romanticized implications of Tom’s actions as well as argued the repercussions of Huck’s willingness to follow. When I told my classes how excited I was to read their paragraphs, they were excited. Each student of course had to claim a specific section as “their idea.” It was refreshing, during my recent teaching lull, to see how excited my students were not only about reading a piece of literature but also writing about it.

During another one of our class discussions today, a student wondered why Huck lost his practicality when living with Aunt Sally and Uncle Silas. She said that when on the river, Huck’s actions lead him out of many difficult and dangerous situations; yet, when with Tom, he just caved to Tom’s romantic ideas. High on yesterday’s writing products, I have decided to use this idea as a catalyst for my students to create individual analysis paragraphs.

Wading through thesis statements

I am currently spending my prep periods grading The Scarlet Letter literary analysis papers. During the reading process I discovered one common thread amongst the papers: no clear thesis statement. Since we are still within the same unit (currently reading The Crucible) I have decided to create a series of minilessons and assignments that focus on developing thesis statements.

Step 1: define thesis statement for the students. Topic + Opinion = Thesis
For this minilesson we created a variety of thesis statements based on The Crucible. I gave the students an example essay question and as a class, they developed a thesis statement. The biggest challenge was getting them to recognize that a thesis didn’t need to be three or four sentences long. Once we broke their ideas down, it seemed quite simple to them. In the end, I think I just had to show them that a thesis statement didn’t need to be this long, intelligent, highly brilliant thing. It is after all just a sentence.

Step 2: students create their own.
I decided to stick with The Crucible as the writing example in order to not confuse the students. Again I gave the students a series of potential essay questions, but this time I sent them away to create the thesis statements on their own.

Student examples:

Control and empowerment is obtained out of personal, selfish desires that damage others’ lives (BC).

Hatred among individuals is rampant in this Puritan community and accusing one’s enemy of witchcraft is the weapon of choice in this society (JS).

Overall, I think the unit was successful. The students seem to have a stronger hold on thesis statements. My goal now is to develop some reteaching minilessons to better prepare the students for the full essay on Civil Disobedience and Letter from Birmingham Jail.

Life of students

In a rare moment of down time last week I caught an episode of Life of Jenks, an MTV show in which the star Andrew Jenks tries to teach (and learn) tolerance and acceptance by living a week with those who are discriminated against. During the show he takes up residence with a wide range of individuals including a rapper, homeless woman and Army sergeant. In this particular episode he stayed with Chad, a twenty-year-old man with Autism.

At the conclusion of the episode Andrew made a comment that he had begun the week thinking he could introduce Chad to some new things; however, in the end it was Chad who taught him.  This statement wasn’t only true for Andrew but also for me, especially as a teacher.

During the show Andrew was really excited to take Chad into New York City. He didn’t stop to think how Chad would feel about this or how he would react to the city itself. Chad ended up hating it. He couldn’t stand all the noise and all the people. This obviously upset Andrew as well for not thinking through his plans and considering Chad’s feelings. This really made me think of how I react to all the students in my classroom. Even though I may lose my patience or become frustrated with my students, I must always remember to see the world through their eyes. Just because my directions seem perfectly clear to me, doesn’t mean they are for them. An easy assignment to me may challenge them in unexpected ways.

Down the rabbit hole

Just as Alice encountered Wonderland when she journeyed down the rabbit hole, the start of a new school year brings with it the opportunity for an exciting new world full of wonder and possibilities.  After spending last year writing on my Journey through the First Year blog (dominated by posts considering classroom management and student engagement), I decided to create a new blog for a new year.  I am dedicating this site to the art of lesson planning and syllabi development. 

This year will once again be full of CyberEnglish9 adventures in which the students and I will defy the concrete walls of our classroom and discuss literature within the virtual realm.  CyberEnglish contains a strong emphasis on literary analysis, which represents my strengths as a teacher (at least I believe so). However, this year also encompasses AP Language & Composition, a first for this teacher.  Although the art of literary analysis is included in AP Lang & Comp, the primary focus of the course is writer improvement.  Of course my first step was to consult with my mentor, the second was to join the professional networking AP English ning and the third step is to constantly (re)consider the syllabus through this blog.

Together with the aid of students, new teachers and experienced mentors (no Queen of Hearts here), a successful year will surely ensue.