To Kill a Mockingbird

I am currently in the middle of the To Kill a Mockingbird unit in CyberEnglish9. Although nervous in the beginning, I found myself growing more and more excited about creating my first literature unit from start to finish. Now that we have completed approximately half the unit, I would like to reflect upon the successes and failures thus far. The foundation of the unit is centered on literature circles. More specifically, I created roles based on those initially established by Harvey Daniels and Jim Burke.

The Bad: The cyberlab environment has not been the most conducive setup for literature circles. My students have been subjected to squeezing circles into tight rows, but they have been excellent at not complaining. Authentic discussion has also been limited. I have found that my students do a wonderful job of answering their role questions prior to discussion time; however, during the literature circle they just read their answers as quickly as possible. Although I defined literature circles for the students and we discussed what they consisted of, I failed to model a successful one. I think this would have enhanced the overall experience for them.

The Good: In conjunction with the literature circle discussion, each student also has to write a blog post about To Kill a Mockingbird. The students’ blog posts have been outstanding, the best all year by far. Based on my experiences in their literature circles, I think this is directly related to their role responses. Even though these responses have not spawned the discussions I envisioned, they have helped the students better understand the text through peer teaching. Here are a couple of the insightful blog posts my students created thus far:

The Fun: Each week I select two days to dedicate towards a minilesson involving the novel. So far these have included a Socioeconomic Character Chart to help students understand the relationship dynamics of the various characters, a map of the fictional Maycomb, and most recently a minilesson on fate and how it effects the plot. The Fate minilesson was inspired by many blog posts I read in which my students wrote things like Scout saved Atticus and Tom, Scout defends Atticus and scares off Mr. Cunningham. I realized that many of my students didn’t understand that Scout’s innocence unknowingly made Mr. Cunningham feel guilty. During the Fate minilesson I had the students get in groups of two or three. In their groups they defined fate in their own words then wrote it on the board. After we discussed the definition of fate as a class, the students went back to their groups and selected an event in the book they felt was determined by fate. They had to describe how the event changed the course of the plot and changed the characters involved in the event.  They then wrote their thoughts on the board in a different color than their fate definitions.

After all of the groups had completed this task, we discussed the various events as a class. We talked about what the actions of the characters revealed about them as humans. We talked about how the events were shaped by the environment and society in which they took place. We talked about how these events were predetermined and that the outcomes were determined by the characters without them even knowing it. In the end, my students had a better understanding of the events that took place within the plot and how the outcomes changed the plot and characters. It was fun and my students were actively engaged in. In fact, in all three of my classes, it became a type of competition. Which group could come up with the most defining moment in the plot? Which group best described how an event changed the plot? Which group came up with the best statement about how the event changed the characters? Hey, a little competition never hurt anyone especially when that competition involved discussing literature!

Fever 1793

The first book I chose to read for the YAL Historical Fiction Challenge was Fever 1793 by Laurie Halse Anderson. I chose this book for a variety of reasons. The main reason was the fact that I have been a devoted Anderson fan since reading Speak. Second, I have seen many of my students reading and blogging about it. Third, I wanted to read a historical novel about an event in American history. 

My initial thoughts? Anderson didn’t let me down. She obviously did massive amounts of research before writing the book. The story resonated the fear that swept through Philadelphia in the fall of 1793. It also accurately portrayed the confusion amongst medicine practitioners about how to treat the illness. I thoroughly enjoyed the Appendix; it made the historical aspect of the book that much more relevant.

So what’s the problem? Anderson’s portrayal of Melinda in Speak was poignant. As a reader, it wasn’t hard to understand and empathize with Melinda’s internal conflict. Her pain and rage reverberated through her sarcasm. With Mattie, I just wasn’t buying it. Her emotions and pain came across at the surface level, nothing deeper. Understandably, a young child would cry through the sorrow of losing her grandfather, especially if that grandfather is the only male-figure in her life. Same is true of the hollowness she felt at not knowing where her mother was or if she survived the epidemic. I also concede that Mattie had to continue living and working to survive, but I would have liked to have had more insight into the physical distraught she was enduring during this time. I also felt that her character achieved a form of happy ever-after at the end of the book. Of course surviving death, disease and motherhood at the age of 14 would lend this type of ending; however, the emotions and mental impact of doing so were not legit.

In the end, I enjoyed the book. It was engaging. I would definitely recommend it to middle school students though; it was not complex enough for what I expect my high school students to be reading.

Fostering life-long readers

This semester brought with it a change in the independent reading blog posts that are required in CyberEnglish9. Last semester, the IR blog posts requirements focused heavily on literary analysis skills. Obviously this is an important writing skill for students to practice in the English classroom; however, I noticed that over the semester the students became increasingly disengaged in the act of reading. Our designated reading day became louder and louder. I became more and more frustrated with the overabundance of socializing. Then one day I was riding home from school with a co-worker or in this case, my co-pilot. We had an amazing conversation about the cruelty J.K. Rowling inflicts upon her characters in the Harry Potter series. We were having fun talking about literature. It dawned on me that independent reading was no longer fun, for the students or for me. I felt like a hypocrite. In my effort to produce stronger writers, I had sucked the joy out of simply escaping into a book by suffocating them with formulaic writing: claim, support, explanation. What was the point of reading for fun if in the end you were subjected to repetitive, disengaging writing assignments? Thus, I made it my mission to put the excitement back into reading this semester, which is the main objective of independent reading: foster life-long readers. I set out to complete my mission with three different approaches.

Approach #1: There was a shift from literary analysis focused blog posts to genre blog posts. Students are able to select creative, abstract writing outlets to express their ideas. Through these posts students are still required to reflect upon the literary elements that make-up the story in their novel. Now, they are able to do so through pieces such as a MP3 playlist of songs that reflect the tone, conflict, desires of the characters in the book. They can construct a piece of poetry that demonstrates the internal-conflicts a character encounters.

Has this been a perfect solution? No, not exactly. Some of the students still struggle with extending their writing beyond summarizing the plot of the text; however, through trial and error they are making strides in their writing. The important part is the process of trial and error, because this shows their engagement. Silent reading days have once again become quiet except for the occasional paper shift. They are once again diving-head first into their novels. The noises of blogging days are once again the sweet sound of clicks from keyboard keys. Even though every student may not nail every blog post, they are excited by the opportunity to express their creativity.

To aid in the writing process, I have been conducting a series of minilessons that reflect the genre posts. For example, the class read and analyzed Walt Whitman’s I Hear America Singing and Langston Hughes’ Let America Be America Again. After we analyzed the poems, the students formed groups to develop one of the optional genre posts. The results were inspiring. One group created a cartoon figure of a character they felt represented Langston Hughes’ poem. This figure was hunched over because of the weight of the working tools strapped to his back. He also had shackles around his legs that were made out of the words that represented the emotions of discrimination and racism. Finally, they pointed out the fact that he didn’t have a face, which expressed their idea that too often people are clumped by meaningless labels and not seen as individuals. A definite step in the right direction.

Approach #2: I borrowed a tool from my co-worker’s Teacher Tool Box and developed a series of interview questions. On select reading days I conduct interviews with students about their independent reading novel. I ask them to describe different literary elements from their books, describe future blog posts they intend on creating, and about what they plan on reading next. If they don’t have any ideas about what to read, I offer my advice. In the beginning, students were extremely hesitant when I called their name for an interview. I think they were nervous about having a conversation with their teacher. I focused on keeping my voice light and airy, nothing too authoritative. I gave them time to consider their responses before answering. I asked follow up questions to engage them further. They are currently preparing for their third interview and they are much more relaxed. In fact, many are excited to talk about their novels. One student today actually asked if he could have an interview. He just finished The Giver by Lowis Lowry and wanted to talk about it. Again, this experience hasn’t been perfect. Not all students are as prepared as they should be to participate in literature discussions. Some students I have to theoretically pull information out of. Finally, I love talking to my students about literature, but the current set-up is not allowing them to talk to each other about literature. This will be my next step in expanding independent reading in my classroom. Those results are for a future blog post though.

Approach #3: For the love of young adult literature! I haven’t read a YAL book this semester! Approach #3, get back into the YAL game. The first book I selected to begin my journey back into the world of YAL is Fever 1793 by Laurie Halse Anderson, which also satisfies the requirements of the YAL Historical Fiction Challenge that I signed up for. I am only about two chapters into the book and I have to admit it is pretty slow moving so far, but it has a lot to live up to, Speak and Twisted. I have had several students comment on how much they loved it though so I vow to finish it. Review to come.

Kindling my love of literature

During a much needed winter break, I was given an Amazon Kindle. Now, I will never again (at least theoretically) be caught without something to read. Shortly after receiving this cherished gift my mentor led me to the website of Dana Huff and her reading challenge Books I Should Have Read in School, but Didn’t. I have to admit I am not quite up to the challenge; perhaps next year. I was inspired to keep a running log of the books (and my thoughts about them) I read during 2011. The only goal I am setting for myself is to experience a wide array of genres. I will document my journey on my blog: Literature as a Portal

November blues

I have found myself feeling a little low as a teacher lately. A combination of icky weather, too many ungraded blogs posts, and a mental block on how to teach visual analysis in an upcoming unit, has left me in a rut. Until today. My daughter’s persistent head cold caused me to miss school yesterday in order to take her to the doctor; however, I didn’t want my students to have the typical “work day” with a sub there. For the past two weeks, my students and I have been reading and discussing Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. I wanted them to continue their animated discussions without me there.

I devised a lesson plan in which the students, as a class, had to create a literary analysis paragraph that considered the following questions:

  • How do the actions of Tom differ from those suggested by Huck?
  • How are Tom’s actions determined by society’s influence?
  • What comment is Twain making about society through Tom?

6th Hour’s response:

Society is very impulsive with their actions, taking little thought for the consequences, as scene in the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. Mark Twain compares the impetuous actions of Tom with Huck’s practical ideas. Tom suggests that they cut off Jim’s leg, while Huck states that “there ain’t no necessity for it” (240). Huck’s beliefs prove to be more logical, while Tom’s are romanticized. Tom’s irrational thinking would get the trio into more trouble than needed. The reason for Tom’s imaginative thoughts stems from the teachings of society through fictional books he reads. “I’ve seen it in books; and so of course that’s what we’ve got to do” (9). This leads into Tom’s irrational ideas later including his question to Huck: “Did you ever hear of prisoner having picks and shovels and all the modern conveniences in his wardrobe to dig himself out with?” (243). Tom then proceeds to aks Huck if he has any reasonableness in him, when it is clear that Huck is more reational, therefore indicating dramatic irony. Twain is emphasizing society’s need to be more pragmatic like Huck, instead of impractical, as show through Tom.

As usual my students surpassed my expectations. Both classes considered the romanticized implications of Tom’s actions as well as argued the repercussions of Huck’s willingness to follow. When I told my classes how excited I was to read their paragraphs, they were excited. Each student of course had to claim a specific section as “their idea.” It was refreshing, during my recent teaching lull, to see how excited my students were not only about reading a piece of literature but also writing about it.

During another one of our class discussions today, a student wondered why Huck lost his practicality when living with Aunt Sally and Uncle Silas. She said that when on the river, Huck’s actions lead him out of many difficult and dangerous situations; yet, when with Tom, he just caved to Tom’s romantic ideas. High on yesterday’s writing products, I have decided to use this idea as a catalyst for my students to create individual analysis paragraphs.